The diagrams below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

The diagrams below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced by using geothermal energy. The process begins
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when the cold
water
is put into a pool, connected with the injection well. The well is 4.5 km long and totally underground.
Then
, the cold
water
is pumped down to the hot rocks area, called the geothermal zone.
While
passing through, the cold
water
was heated by the rocks
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and
then
pumped up by using a production well. The production well has a closed structure with a connector to the area, where the turbine and generator are located.
As a result
of the underground process,
water
vaporizes and the condensation creates a stream, which, through the connector, pushes the turbine. After that, a generator, powered by a turbine, produces electricity, which eventually comes to the tower.
Overall
, in the geothermal process, both heat and
water
are used to create electricity, and it takes place both underground and
upper ground
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