The diagrams below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced by using geothermal energy.
The process begins
,
when the cold Remove the comma
apply
water
is put into a pool, connected with the injection well. The well is 4.5 km long and totally underground. Use synonyms
Then
, the cold Linking Words
water
is pumped down to the hot rocks area, called the geothermal zone. Use synonyms
While
passing through, the cold Linking Words
water
was heated by the rocksUse synonyms
,
and Remove the comma
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then
pumped up by using a production well.
The production well has a closed structure with a connector to the area, where the turbine and generator are located. Linking Words
As a result
of the underground process, Linking Words
water
vaporizes and the condensation creates a stream, which, through the connector, pushes the turbine. After that, a generator, powered by a turbine, produces electricity, which eventually comes to the tower.
Use synonyms
Overall
, in the geothermal process, both heat and Linking Words
water
are used to create electricity, and it takes place both underground and Use synonyms
upper ground
.Correct your spelling
underground
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