The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The blueprint shows a difference between the current public library directory and how it looked 20 years ago.
It can be seen clearly that the floor plan of the public library has made significant changes over 20 years.
While
some features remain the same, some are eliminated from the floor.
The number of tables and chairs in the library has significantly decreased today compared to the past 20 years. Linking Words
Additionally
, a cafe and computer room have been added to the current floor plan, and the adult non-fiction books area was eliminated, Linking Words
while
the information desk and self-service machine have been a new addition to the plan.
Linking Words
Furthermore
, the section for multimedia (CDs, videos, and computer games) has been completely replaced by now with a room for storytelling events and an area for Children's fiction books.Linking Words
Submitted by jermias.darondo89 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼