This diagram below shows the manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar cane.
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diagram shows the process of making sugar from a carbohydrate can.
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Farming carbohydrates until dry carbohydrate contains seven steps of long-term methods.To start with growth should continue for towel to eighteen months.
The second step is to harvest after the mentioned months of times of planning.
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, crush it until white juice. As is contain until raw material to juice
Filtering is another part of the process to start before heat. During Linking Words
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period manufacturers use an evaporator to heat the poured sugar to heat.
Makeover when liquid becomes syrup by help from separating the sugar crystal from syrup
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gathered into a container for cooling and drying to take its order.
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, in conclusion, the activity and the produced which is now ready to use.Linking Words
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