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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates how average
house
prices
 changed in five various cities in two periods including 1990 and 1995, 1996 and 2002 compared with the average
house
prices
 in 1989.
Overall
, the average
house
prices
 in four cities were a significant increase
while
 the average
house
 in Germany was a slight decrease. The chart below shows information about changes in average
house
prices
 in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average
house
prices
 in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. From 1990 to 1995, the
prices
 of houses in New York climbed by 5%.
Similarly
, the figures for Madrid and Tokyo rose by 2% and about 8% respectively.
In contrast
, the
prices
 of accommodation in Frankfurt increased
to
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 3%. The figure for London declined by 8%. Between 1996 and 2002, the
prices
 of houses in NewYork and Madrid went up 5% and 4% respectively. There was a slight decrease to 5% in Tokyo.
Additionally
, the figure for Frankfurt declined by 2%. The percentage of average houses in London
was
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significantly increased to 12% in the
last
 period.
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