The bar chart shows the participation of children is selected leisure activities in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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boys
and girls
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boys
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crafts
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accounted for 80% in electronic and computer games, which is higher than girls
with 60%.Submitted by yasaman.bozorgzad9 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, art with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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