Problems with environmental pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.

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impact
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the impact
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of harmful
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on the
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has become
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of the major problems that people should pay attention
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gases
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and
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emitted by
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are claimed to be the main reasons behind
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issue, there are some effective
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of
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. On the
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hand,
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impact
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the impact
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of harmful
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on the
environment
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. The first driving force behind
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problem
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is
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gases
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emitted by
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, it is known,
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are a lot of
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around the world which
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on oil and gas fuel. The waste
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produced by them cause great damage to the
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. Another important reason
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issue can be
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gases
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emitted by
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because it is known, there are many
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around the world. They produce a lot of exhaust
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, despite the fact that
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impact
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the impact
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of harmful
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on the
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is a serious
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, there are some reliable
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to it. The first viable solution to
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is
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that
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electric
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, obviously, electric
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do not emit harmful
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and they are harmless to the
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. Another significant way by which
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can be tackled is
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one
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day without
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. The reason for
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is that on
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day of every month, the work of
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should be stopped. Because the daily amount of
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released from them is
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impact
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the impact
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of harmful
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on the
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is
serious
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a serious
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problem
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that is
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creating many negative effects, it can be addressed with the
solutions
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that have been mentioned above.
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coherence cohesion
Improve the logical flow of ideas by ensuring each paragraph is linked smoothly. Use transition phrases between paragraphs to show connections between points.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples to support main points clearly. Avoid vague statements and back up assertions with data or case studies where possible.
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Develop each idea more comprehensively. Explain how each suggested solution addresses the problem in detail, and consider potential drawbacks or challenges associated with each solution.
coherence cohesion
Good use of an introductory and concluding paragraph. The essay structure is clear, making it easy to follow the argument.
task achievement
The essay identifies two main causes of environmental pollution and provides two potential solutions, showing a balanced approach to the task.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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