The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparasions where relevant.

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The diagram depicts the new refurbishment applied on the central library floor, after 20 years.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the

center

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centre

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contained four main regions including, the bottom left, the bottom

right

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, the upper left, and the upper

right

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. Considering the changes applied to the bottom areas,

it is clear that

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the inquiry desk on the

right

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section was replaced by a cafe, and the reading

room

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on the left section was replaced with a computer

room

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On the other hand

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, the

right

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upper was changed to a lecture

room

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and the left area was expanded and changed into a huge

room

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catering for kids with Children's fiction

books

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, storytelling events, and two additional sofas.

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, the central section removed all the tables and chairs that were placed in the

center

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and replaced the Adult fiction

books

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with all reference

books

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Additionally

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, the far

right

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area turned into a large

room

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containing adult fiction

books

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, an Information desk, and self-service machines.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words right, room, books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

162 words

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