The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparasions where relevant.
The diagram depicts the new refurbishment applied on the central library floor, after 20 years.
Overall
, it is clear that
the center
contained four main regions including, the bottom left, the bottom Change the spelling
centre
right
, the upper left, and the upper right
.
Considering the changes applied to the bottom areas, it is clear that
the inquiry desk on the right
section was replaced by a cafe, and the reading room
on the left section was replaced with a computer room
.
On the other hand
, the right
upper was changed to a lecture room
and the left area was expanded and changed into a huge room
catering for kids with Children's fiction books
, storytelling events, and two additional sofas.
Lastly
, the central section removed all the tables and chairs that were placed in the center
and replaced the Adult fiction Change the spelling
centre
books
with all reference books
. Additionally
, the far right
area turned into a large room
containing adult fiction books
, an Information desk, and self-service machines.Submitted by marammajid1999 on
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