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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparasions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparasions where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the new refurbishment applied on the central library floor, after 20 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
center
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 contained four main regions including, the bottom left, the bottom
right
, the upper left, and the upper
right
. Considering the changes applied to the bottom areas,
it is clear that
 the inquiry desk on the
right
 section was replaced by a cafe, and the reading
room
 on the left section was replaced with a computer
room
.
On the other hand
, the
right
 upper was changed to a lecture
room
 and the left area was expanded and changed into a huge
room
 catering for kids with Children's fiction
books
, storytelling events, and two additional sofas.
Lastly
, the central section removed all the tables and chairs that were placed in the
center
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 and replaced the Adult fiction
books
 with all reference
books
.
Additionally
, the far
right
 area turned into a large
room
 containing adult fiction
books
, an Information desk, and self-service machines.
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