The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The chart illustrates how many students from one university, that learned Anthropology, integrated into the working market,
while
the table describes the level of salaries
and type of employment.
In terms of destination of Anthropology graduates, 52% have full-time work
, and 12% are unemployed. Interestingly, 8% continue full-time postgraduate study, and only 5% combine part-time work
and postgraduate study.
In terms of salaries
, based on 5 years' work
statistics, the government sector pays the highest salaries
, as 50% of graduates earn more than 100,000 USD, while
in private companies it accounted for 30% only. In addition
, private companies have the biggest
rate of low Correct word choice
lowest
salaries
( 25000-49999 USD), which is twice bigger compared to the rest of the market,
and accounted for 10%. Remove the comma
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Finally
, most of the employees as freelance consultants earn above 75000 USD ( 80% )
Overall
, two-thirds of the Anthropology graduates work
, while
12% continue learning. The government sector pays the biggest salaries
, while
private companies pay the least, however
, most the
freelance consultants earn relatively high Correct article usage
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salaries
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