The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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The chart illustrates how many students from one university, that learned Anthropology, integrated into the working market,

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the table describes the level of

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and type of employment. In terms of destination of Anthropology graduates, 52% have full-time

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, and 12% are unemployed. Interestingly, 8% continue full-time postgraduate study, and only 5% combine part-time

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and postgraduate study. In terms of

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, based on 5 years'

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statistics, the government sector pays the highest

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, as 50% of graduates earn more than 100,000 USD,

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in private companies it accounted for 30% only.

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, private companies have the

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( 25000-49999 USD), which is twice bigger compared to the rest of the market

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and accounted for 10%.

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, most of the employees as freelance consultants earn above 75000 USD ( 80% )

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, two-thirds of the Anthropology graduates

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12% continue learning. The government sector pays the biggest

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private companies pay the least,

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freelance consultants earn relatively high

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