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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart clearly demonstrates the changes fix distinct countries faced in house
prices
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 from 1990 to 2002,
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 the average
prices
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 in 1989.
Overall
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, it is evident that
while
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prices
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 were mostly lowered in the first five
years
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, for the next
years
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 they mainly skyrocketed. Regarding the first five
years
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, Tokyo and London experienced the most abrupt changes of well above -5% in comparison with that of 1989.
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,
although
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 housing
prices
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 in New York declined
similarly
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,
this
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 change was less significant with a percentage of 5%. In terms of Madrid and Frankfurt,
however
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, the
prices
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 witnessed nearly a 2% increment . Looking at the
years
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 1996-2002, London's house
prices
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 surged to more than 10% higher than that in 1989.
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, the same figure for Tokyo kept dwindling by 5%. In terms of New York, Madrid, and Frankfurt,
prices
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 soared considerably to nearly 5% for the two former and just above 1% for the latter, respectively.
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