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The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart presents the Qatar and Omani important issues (in
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) for some groceries in 1990.
Overall
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, there is a trend, that the second country has better import terms than the first one.
Although
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 there is only one item, which has an equal average, it is Ginger.
First,
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we need to understand, that the whole of Qatar's imports consist of 1460
tonnes
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.
Second,
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the most consumed vegetables are Spinach(450
tonnes
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) and Ginger(300
tonnes
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). They have over half of the import's supplies. The other half has Peas(150
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), Broccoli(220
tonnes
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) and Garlic (340
tonnes
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). Literally, the presented data supports that the level of the country's import is lower than in the second country.
On the other hand
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, green trading is more developed in Oman. Actually, the total term is 2400
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, which is over 1.5 times bigger than Qatar's. The biggest pie parts are Garlic(800
tonnes
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) and Spinach(600
tonnes
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). They take the Major part of the chart.
However
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, the minor part has Broccoli and Ginger, both by 300
tonnes
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 and Peas (400
tonnes
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).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
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