The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
A glance at the two maps provided reveals the
floor
map of a public library two
decade
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ago and how it seems now.
Overall
, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the first provides information on
old
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floor
including three rooms,
while
the second indicates a huge change in
new
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floor
with four rooms.
According to
what is shown, it is
notworthy
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noteworthy
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to note that the
room
of
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children’s books has
converted
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to
lecture
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room
without any changes.
Furthermore
. the reading
room
has
replaced
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to
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with
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the cumputer
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cumputer
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computer
room
with
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changing its entrance.
Additionally
, the games’
room
has
substituted
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with
books’
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room
in addition
its rooms
has
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increased and
likewise
be adding two
sofa
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.
In contrast
, the tables,
chaires
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chairs
, all reference books and
enquiry
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desk have
removed
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.
Moreover
,
information
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desk and self-service machines have
added
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on the right hand of the
floor
. It is interesting to note that
adults
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fiction books
has
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only placed on
right
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hand of the
floor
close to
lecture
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the lecture
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room
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words floor, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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