The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
A glance at the two maps provided reveals the
floor
map of a public library two decade
ago and how it seems now.
Change to a plural noun
decades
Overall
, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the first provides information on old
Add an article
the old
floor
including three rooms, while
the second indicates a huge change in new
Add an article
the new
floor
with four rooms.
According to
what is shown, it is notworthy
to note that the Correct your spelling
noteworthy
not worthy
room
of
children’s books has Change preposition
for
converted
to Add a missing verb
been converted
lecture
Correct article usage
a lecture
room
without any changes. Furthermore
. the reading room
has replaced
Add a missing verb
been replaced
to
Change preposition
with
Correct article usage
the cumputer
cumputer
Correct your spelling
computer
room
with
changing its entrance. Change preposition
by
Additionally
, the games’ room
has substituted
with Add a missing verb
been substituted
books’
Correct article usage
the books’
room
in addition
its rooms has
increased and Correct subject-verb agreement
have
likewise
be adding two sofa
.
Change to a plural noun
sofas
In contrast
, the tables, chaires
, all reference books and Correct your spelling
chairs
enquiry
desk have Correct article usage
the enquiry
removed
. Add a missing verb
been removed
Moreover
, information
desk and self-service machines have Correct article usage
an information
added
on the right hand of the Add a missing verb
been added
floor
. It is interesting to note that adults
fiction books Change the noun form
adult
has
only placed on Change the verb form
have
right
hand of the Add an article
the right
floor
close to lecture
Correct article usage
the lecture
room
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Vocabulary: Replace the words floor, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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