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the table below gives information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffees and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

the table below gives information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffees and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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The given graphs depict the
revenue
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 earned from Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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 and
bananas
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 in 5 different nations in Europe between 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, it is evident that
while
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 the sale of
bananas
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 increased in most countries, with the exception
for
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of
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 Sweden and Belgium, the sale of
coffee
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 experienced an upward mainstream in all European nations. Especially, the significant changes were seen in the
UK
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 and Switzerland. Switzerland was the top class in selling
coffee
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 among many countries, earning nearly $3
million
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 in 1999, and its
revenue
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 increased doubly to $6
million
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 in the next 5
years
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. The
revenue
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 from trading
coffee
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 in the
UK
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 witnessed a significant increasing trend, rising from $1.5
million
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 to $20
million
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 during a 5-year period, surpassing the figure for the
UK
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 in 2004. A slight increase in selling
coffee
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 was witnessed in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden, just under $2
million
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 until 2004.
UK
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 accounted for the highest
revenue
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 from selling
bananas
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 in both 2
years
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, from $15
million
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 in 1999 to $47
million
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 in 2004. The second highest position was related to Switzerland, with a significant increase of $4.5
million
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 from 1999 to 2004. Simultaneously, the
revenue
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 of
bananas
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 in Denmark went up by $3.4
million
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 during 5
years
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.
However
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, the opposite trend was seen in the figures for Denmark and Sweden, falling to nearly $1
million
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 after 5
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, coffee, bananas, uk, million, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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