You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart depicts the various transportation ways in order to commute by workforces in a European municipality over the 40-year period.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
most individuals tend to use their automobiles Correct article usage
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at the end
of period
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the period
while
the least commuters were fond of using their bicycles in 2000. Also
, the rate of public transportation users were fluctuated
over these years.
Change to the active voice
fluctuated
have fluctuated
According to
the data, in 1960, the most people were hiking to their companies with just under %40, followed by their bicyclist counterparts, the bus travellers and the car owners with %25, almost %18 and only %5 respectively. However
, in 1980, there was a significant reduction in those who were walking to their destinations by %20. In addition
, this
trend followed by their bicyclist colleagues and they are reached %20. But, the car ownership rates rose dramatically to just over %20 and
the publ
ic transportation users number increased to almost %25.
In 2000, the highest proportCorrect quantifier usage
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the vehicle ownCorrect article usage
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s by %40 and the lowest rChange preposition
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were bike travellChange the verb form
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with %5. Change preposition
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Finally
, the third place were bus users, followed by hiking commuters with %15 and roughly %8 respectively.Submitted by pooya.olad on
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