The chart below shows the average number of kilometers traveled by car in five countries from 1990 to 2010.

The chart below shows the average number of kilometers traveled by car in five countries from 1990 to 2010.
The provided line chart illustrates how many total
kilometres
of distance cars were in five different countries between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the average number of
kilometres
in the US had the biggest spot among other categories. Meanwhile, Japan had the lowest position during the entire period.
To begin
with, there was an increase in the average total number in the US and The UK from 1990 to 2010. It started from the US distance of around 1700
kilometres
,
then
increased up to 1800 in 1995.
This
trend
fluctuated from 1995 to 2010.
Next,
The UK started around 1300
kilometres
and ended about 1400
kilometres
. The UK had a similar pattern which fluctuated as the US, from about 1993 to 2010.
In contrast
, Germany, France and Japan experienced a downward
trend
in the average distance during the same time frame. Germany began around 1600
kilometres
and decreased to roughly 1300
kilometres
. The significant decrease started from 1995 to the next 5 years.
Then
, France declined, from 1000 to less than 900
kilometres
.
This
figure had a similar
trend
as German.
However
, Japan had a deviation
trend
which started from about 700 to around 400
kilometres
.
This
account even hit a low point at 380 in 2003.
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