The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewable in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the sources of
production
of electricity in two countries while
showing the proportions related to renewable sources seperately
.
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separately
Overall
, there was a drastical
difference between the way of electricity Correct your spelling
drastic
generating
and the way of renewable Replace the word
generation
energy
production
in Germany
and France
in 2009.
In detail,Germany
was more concern
about conventional thermal Replace the word
concerned
production
at 59.6%,whereas
nuclear source was the major at 76% in France
. Lowest
proportion of contribution was from Add an article
The lowest
regular
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the regular
heat forming
method in Add a hyphen
heat-forming
France
at 10.3%. slightly less than Correct article usage
a quater
quater
of Correct your spelling
quarter
energy
production
was through nuclear resources in Germany
this
year.
To elaborate more, majority
of renewable Correct article usage
the majority
ener
was taken from hydroelectric power at 80.5% in Correct your spelling
energy
France
although
it was used less than fifth
from renewable Correct article usage
a fifth
energy
. Biomass and wind contributed in
more or less the same Change preposition
apply
amout
in Correct your spelling
amount
Germany
which counted more than two third
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two-thirds
from
whole renewable resources.Solar was the least used reproductable Change preposition
of
energy
source in both countries.Submitted by dinaka0001 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, energy, germany, france with synonyms.
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