In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
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Try to balance the advantages and disadvantages more equally in terms of explanation depth and examples. While the advantages have been nicely explained with an example, the disadvantages could be expanded with personal reflection or additional examples.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure logical linking between all paragraphs and ideas. Some transitions are unclear or abrupt. Using transition words can help your essay flow more naturally.
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Good use of specific examples to support your points, such as survey results and studies.
coherence and cohesion
Clear inclusion of both introduction and conclusion that neatly frames the essay.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.