The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
The chart shows the spending
according to
eight different categories as Linking Words
Add an article
a percent
percent
of weekly Change the spelling
per cent
income
in one country in 1968 and 2018.
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First,
in 1968 Linking Words
average
family spent on food 35% of Correct article usage
the average
total
weekly Correct pronoun usage
their total
income
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,
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on, while
while
Linking Words
rest
categories Correct article usage
the rest
viried
from 5% to 10%. Correct your spelling
varied
However
, in 2018 the expenses of leisure were Linking Words
main
part of the budget, Add an article
the main
a main
accounted
for approximately 22%, followed by housing with around 18%, and moving food to Wrong verb form
accounting
the
third place, Correct article usage
apply
slighly
above the Correct your spelling
slightly
expeditures
on transport.
Correct your spelling
expenditure
expenditures
In addition
, spending on personal Linking Words
good
, fuel and power, and closing and Fix the agreement mistake
goods
footware
halved, Correct your spelling
footwear
accounted
for less than 5% of weekly Wrong verb form
accounting
income
. Use synonyms
Finally
, household goods were roughly 7% in both 1968 and 2018.
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Overall
, during Linking Words
fifty-year
period of Add an article
the fifty-year
a fifty-year
time
the average weekly spending as part of weekly Add a comma
time,
income
changed a lot. Use synonyms
Budget
on food halved,Add an article
The budget
spendings
on housing, transport, Correct your spelling
spending
leisure
increased, and on personal Correct word choice
and leisure
good
, fuel and power, and closing and Fix the agreement mistake
goods
footware
decreased, and only household Correct your spelling
footwear
good
remained at the same level.Fix the agreement mistake
goods
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