The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph indicates the total of crimes committed in England and Wales during the period of 35 years from 1970 to 2005. Based on the chart, auto burglary was the most common type of crime that occurred in England and Wales during that period,
while
street robbery was the least kind. Between 1970 and 1990, the total of automobile embezzlement and home burgling were increasing though the growths were different among these three. convertible break-in and building burglary had a similar increment, with a 600,000 gain from 400,000 in 1970 to 1,000,000 in 1990 for auto break-in,
whereas
home burglary experienced a slightly smaller surge, 500,000, from 200,000 in 1970 to 700,000 in 1990.
In contrast
, the number of street robbery cases between 1970 and 1990 was stagnant at 50,000.
Additionally
, in 1995 the number of stolen cars in England and Wales jumped to its peak at 1,600,000 cases.
However
,
this
trend did not continue afterwards, there was a decrease in the case of stolen automobiles during 1995-2005 1,6000,000 to be back to its previous level in 1990. The figure of houses breached illegally between 1995 and 2005
also
dipped from 700,000 in 1995 to 500,000 in 2005. Again and again,
this
tendency did not apply to street robbery which saw
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, albeit a smaller one, from 100,000 in 1995 to 200,000 in 2005.
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