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The chart below shows average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1993 and 2003 are shown in the bar chart below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1993 and 2003 are shown in the bar chart below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Overall
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, the price of the
cloth
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 is cheaper when the distance in
Europe
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 is far. There is a change that comes from the exporter in
Asia
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, but the price of the
cloth
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 is less than the
cloth
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that is
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 imported from Argentina and Brazil. Most of the
prices
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 in
Asia
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 were cheaper in 1993 than in
Europe
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. In 2003, the price of the
cloth
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 in
Asia
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 had increased.
However
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, Japan in 1993 had more
prices
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 than in 2003 and other countries in
Asia
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.
This
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 meant that in
Asia
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, Japan had the highest
prices
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 of
cloth
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 in
Asia
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. In
Europe
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, there were more
prices
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 for clothes in 1993 than in
Asia
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.
This
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 meant that
cloth
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 in
Europe
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 had sold more in
Europe
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 than in
Asia
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. In 2003, the
prices
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 in Argentina seemed to reduce. In Brazil, the
prices
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 of the
cloth
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 were still the same in 1993 and 2003. Only the
prices
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 in Argentina had reduced.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cloth, europe, asia, prices with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
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