The chart below shows average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1993 and 2003 are shown in the bar chart below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1993 and 2003 are shown in the bar chart below.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, the price of the
cloth
is cheaper when the distance in
Europe
is far. There is a change that comes from the exporter in
Asia
, but the price of the
cloth
is less than the
cloth
that is
imported from Argentina and Brazil. Most of the
prices
in
Asia
were cheaper in 1993 than in
Europe
. In 2003, the price of the
cloth
in
Asia
had increased.
However
, Japan in 1993 had more
prices
than in 2003 and other countries in
Asia
.
This
meant that in
Asia
, Japan had the highest
prices
of
cloth
in
Asia
. In
Europe
, there were more
prices
for clothes in 1993 than in
Asia
.
This
meant that
cloth
in
Europe
had sold more in
Europe
than in
Asia
. In 2003, the
prices
in Argentina seemed to reduce. In Brazil, the
prices
of the
cloth
were still the same in 1993 and 2003. Only the
prices
in Argentina had reduced.
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