The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
The line chart demonstrates and gives
the
helicopter view of the sales of three best-seller items in a bakery in 2014.
As can be seen clearly from the chart, in the first and Correct article usage
a
last
two months, bread stayed at the highest rank Linking Words
while
pies seemed to be at the lowest position. Linking Words
Moreover
, bread and pies fluctuated and had an upward trend Linking Words
while
buns witnessed a downward trend.
In January, the sales of bread started at 80,000$ Linking Words
then
ranging dramatically from 40,000$ to 65,000$ before it increased and stopped at 80,000$ in December.
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Furthermore
, in the first month of the year, buns rose noticeably from 40,000$ to 70,000$ and stayed at 70,000$ for four months from May to August, after which it witnessed a marked downward trend to 30,000$ in December.
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Lastly
, pies had Linking Words
lowest
sales with only 10,000$ in January Correct article usage
the lowest
then
climbed slightly to 20,000$ in October before increasing rapidly to 40,000$ in the Linking Words
last
month of the year.Linking Words
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