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The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table
data
 represents the
amount
 spent by consumers in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in three categories in the year 2002. As is presented in the table
data
,
People
 of those countries spent more on
foods
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food
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 and
tobaccos
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tobacco
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 than they did
for
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 dresses,
education
 and
entertainments
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entertainment
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.
According to
 the given
data
, Turk
people
 spent the highest percentage
of
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 foods and
tobaccos
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tobacco
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 amounting
one-third
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 of their total expenses on consumer products. Irish
people
 spent more than 28% on
this
 category
while
people
of
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 Italy, Spain and Sweden spent just over 15%
for
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foods
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food
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 and
tobaccos
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tobacco
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. For clothing and footwear, the
people
 of these five countries spent around 5% to 9% of which
Italian
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Italians
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 spent the highest percentage (9%). Interestingly the expenditure
in
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 leisure activities and
education
 was much less than the
amount
 spent on food, tobacco and dresses. The highest
amount
 spent on
education
 and entertainment was done by Turkish
people
 (4.35%) and the least
amount
 spent
by
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was in Spain (1.98%). No nation among the given five spent more than 5%
in
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education
 and leisure activities
according to
 the given
data
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words data, amount, people, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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