The diagram below shows the manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar cane

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar cane
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A step-by-step visualization of the
process
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of the production of
sugar
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grains
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from
sugar
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cane is illustrated.
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, it is understood that the
process
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of turning
sugar
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cane into
sugar
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consists of seven stages from cultivating the plant to cooling the produced
grains
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. A close look
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the data shows that when the
initially
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planted
sugar
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canes are fully grown (12-18 months old) they will be harvested either
mannually
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manually
or by the use of special trucks. The collected plants
then
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are crushed aiming to
extact
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extract
the juice which
subsecuently
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subsequently
, will be purified using a limestone filter. The pure liquid
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goes through an evaporation
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and comes out in the form of syrup containing
sugar
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crystals that will be
seperated
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separated
from the syrup in the next stage
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the help of a centrifuge followed by the final phase of the
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that includes drying and colling down the
sugar
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grains
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.
To sum up
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, the
process
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of transformation of
sugar
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cane plants to the crystalized
grains
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of
sugar
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is mostly machinery with the exception of the minor manual harvest in the second step of the graph.
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