task 1: the maps below show the changes to an art gallery floor plan in 2005 and the present day.

task 1: the maps below show the changes to an art gallery floor plan in 2005 and the present day.
The diagrams illustrate how an art
gallery
floor’s layout has changed since 2005.
Overall
, the art
gallery
has had its floor reconstructed over the given period, with more space and the addition of new amenities for both the outside and the inside. Looking first at the top left corner of the 2005 map, there used to be a cafe shop before it was replaced by a
gallery
one
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, which occupies less area than that of the former.
Basing
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Based
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on one side
the
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of the
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gallery
, the vending machine is the supplier
for
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of
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beverages
instead
of the coffee shop.
Additionally
, there is a lift next to the right side of the staircase in
present
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the present
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days
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day
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. Turning to the bottom left corner, where
a
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exhibition room number 4 was located has been constructed
to
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into
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2 sectors:
temporary
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a temporary
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exhibition and
area
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an area
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catering to children. Meanwhile, the position
for
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receptionist was transferred from the corner right between the staircase and
gallery
office in 2005, which was
then
remove
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removed
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to make more room, to the
center
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of the
gallery
floor.
In contrast
, a row of exhibition rooms on the right side remains unchanged with the entrance,
while
the external area
was
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added ramps for
wheel chair
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wheelchair
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.
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