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Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
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The bar chart depicts the exports of pineapples by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019,
while
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 the pie chart illustrates the proportional breakdown of the cost to consumers of each pineapple in 2019.
Overall
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,
Country
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 B had the highest exports of pineapples in 2009,
whereas
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Country
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 A became the leading exporter by 2019. The largest proportion of the cost to consumers in 2019 was attributed to distribution and retail. In 2009,
Country
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 C had the lowest export volume, slightly increasing to nearly 1
million
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tonnes
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 in 2019, yet it remained the smallest exporter.
Country
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 B, which exported just above 4
million
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tonnes
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 in 2009, saw a significant reduction to just below 2
million
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tonnes
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 in 2019.
Conversely
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,
Country
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 A's exports rose dramatically from below 2
million
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tonnes
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 to just over 10
million
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tonnes
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 in 2019. Regarding the cost breakdown in 2019, distribution and retail accounted for the largest share, over one-third of the total expenditure. Another third was nearly evenly split between profit and taxes. The remaining proportion, about 29%, was divided among producer costs, export costs, international transport, and import licenses.
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