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Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
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The bar
chart
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 depicts a comparison between the volume of the top three
pineapple
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 manufacturer nations from 2003 to 2019,
while
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 the pie
chart
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 offers insights into the proportion of consumer expenses in 2019.
Overall
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, it is notable that, in
country
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 A the number of metric tonnes of
pineapple
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 has the highest increase,
while
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country
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 C has the lowest production in both years. As we can see in the bar
chart
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, in
country
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 A, the number of metric tonnes of
pineapple
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 rocketed by 9 million (from 1 to over 10 million) over the 10-year period.
On the other hand
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, the total volume produced by
Country
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 B became the highest in 2009 at over 4 million,
then
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 the same production nation decreased in the next 10 years.
Finally
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, the volume of
pineapple
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 production in
country
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 C was the lowest in both years. Regarding the pie
chart
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, clearly over a third per cent of the expenses are for distribution and retail, which was the highest,
while
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 the costs are considered important for producers and taxes (18% and 16%, respectively) in 2019.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, pineapple, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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