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Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
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The bar
chart
 depicts a comparison between the volume of the top three
pineapple
 manufacturer nations from 2003 to 2019,
while
 the pie
chart
 offers insights into the proportion of consumer expenses in 2019.
Overall
, it is notable that, in
country
 A the number of metric tonnes of
pineapple
 has the highest increase,
while
country
 C has the lowest production in both years. As we can see in the bar
chart
, in
country
 A, the number of metric tonnes of
pineapple
 rocketed by 9 million (from 1 to over 10 million) over the 10-year period.
On the other hand
, the total volume produced by
Country
 B became the highest in 2009 at over 4 million,
then
 the same production nation decreased in the next 10 years.
Finally
, the volume of
pineapple
 production in
country
 C was the lowest in both years. Regarding the pie
chart
, clearly over a third per cent of the expenses are for distribution and retail, which was the highest,
while
 the costs are considered important for producers and taxes (18% and 16%, respectively) in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, pineapple, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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