The maps show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000

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The maps illustrate changes made to the town of Willington between 1780 and 2000 years

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, the town transitioned from a primarily agricultural settlement to a more urbanized residential area, integrating various public amenities and commercial facilities. In 1780, Willington was sparsely populated with only 100 houses located in the northeast. The town

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was occupied by four distinct farmlands. By 1860, significant changes had occurred. The number of farms had reduced by half, and 100 new cottages were constructed, accommodating more residents.

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, the southeastern quadrant, once densely forested, saw the trees cleared. A bridge was constructed over the

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period. By 2000, Willington had undergone substantial redevelopment, with many new facilities added. The residential area had expanded significantly, with the number of houses increasing to 500. These homes were connected to a

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sports field located in the southwest by a new road. The area immediately east of the river had been developed into a row of shops.

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, a wetland for birds had been established in the southern part.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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The maps show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000

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