The chart below gives information on the numbers of workers in different occupations who migrates to Australia between 2009 and 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information on the numbers of workers in different occupations who migrates to Australia between 2009 and 2012

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates how many migratory employees worked in different jobs in Australia from 2009 to 2012
Overall
, there was a fluctuation in the number of workers who migrated to Australia in each given field of work. The figure for accounting jobs was always highest,
while
the opposite was true for computer programmers. Migrants working in accounting started at 20,000, after which it experienced a significant rise to the highest point at 28,000 in 2010,
then
fell to 22,000 and 21,000 in 2011 and 2012,respectively.
Initially
, the percentage of the job of a computer programmer stood at 2,000, after which fluctuated to 4,000 in 2010, it returned to the beginning
then
increased sharply by 3,000 in the
last
year. 17,000 migratory employees worked in the cooking field in 2009, with subsequent fluctuation and a final decrease to 6,000.
Similarly
, the proportion of a job in the software engineering field rose slowly to 19,000,20,000 and 21,000 in the first three years, respectively after which it decreased to 17,000 in 2012.
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