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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph illustrates the number of prices of
bananas
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 in four countries in 1998 and 2004.
furthermore
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, the horizontal axis shows us dollars
also
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 the vertical axis shows the year. It has four countries:
Japan
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,
France
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,
Germany
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 and the United States.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
price
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 of
bananas
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 in
Germany
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 and
France
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 experienced the highest
trend
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thus
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 the United States and
Germany
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 experienced
bananas
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 varied considerably.
Firstly
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,
according to
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 the graph displayed,
Japan
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's
price
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 of
bananas
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 increased was just under 2.75 in 1995 but
however
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Japan
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's
price
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 of
bananas
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 dropped from 1998 to 2001 time period.
Japan
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's lowest
price
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 of
bananas
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 was just under 1.60$ in 2001 and
France
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's
price
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 of
bananas
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 experienced, the
price
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 of
bananas
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 increase from 2000 to 2001 time period
while
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France
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's
price
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 of
bananas
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 highest
trend
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 was just under 1.80$ in 2001.
On the other hand
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,
Germany
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 increased the
price
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 of
bananas
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 two times. It is from 1995 to 1996 and 1998 to 1999
hence
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 in
Germany
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 the
price
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 of
bananas
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 is a high
trend
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 was just under 1.50$ and in
Germany
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 the
price
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 of
bananas
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 lowest was just under 1.30 from 2002 to 2004 time period.
moreover
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, the US increased the
price
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 of
bananas
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 from 1994 to 1995
in other words
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, the US's highest
trend
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 was just under 1.30 in 1995 and the lowest
trend
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 was just under 1.20$ from 2002 to 2004

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, japan, france, germany, price, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 7 times.
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