The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart illustrates how many houses that built in Derby and Nottingham from 2000 to 2009. The units are measured per
year
.
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Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the living places built in both cities had a Linking Words
fluctuate
movement Change the verb form
fluctuating
through
a period of time, Change preposition
over
while
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at the end
Linking Words
year
, the house project witnessed a dramatic increase.
In terms of the number of Use synonyms
the
houses built in Derby, it stood at just below 50 in 2000 and remained steady in the following Correct article usage
apply
year
. Use synonyms
Thereafter
, it increased slightly to exactly 120 in 2003 Linking Words
then
remained stable over a period of 5 years. From Linking Words
this
point onward, it rose dramatically and reached a peak at around 350.
Regarding the houses built in Nottingham, it started at precisely 50 in 2000. Linking Words
While
it saw a regular increase just above 50 in 2001, Linking Words
then
it fell moderately to around 20 in 2001. From Linking Words
this
point onward, it peaked at exactly 250 in 2009, despite it had a plummet one Linking Words
year
before.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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