60.The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

60.The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given chart is a figure revealing data about the number of cinema visitors in Auckland, from 1995 to 2003, which is compared in 2 groups of age.
Overall
, the percentage of attendance increased during
this
period
,
while
cinema visitors at certain ages decreased.
Moreover
, the people who are in age groups experienced a downward trend. As the tables show, in 1996, the proportion of all people who preferred to go to the cinemas was 62%, and it increased in 1997, to 72%. After that, it remained unchanged at 72% until 1998.
Then
it experienced a fluctuation, and saw 72% again, by 2000.
While
the amount of
Frequency
Replace the word
Frequent
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visitors diminished during
this
period
to 8.3, by 2000. In order to visitor, who had a certain age, by 1996, all ages were in the lowest stage, between 10-15. In 1997 and 1999, they reached a peak, at 21 and 24, respectively.
Whereas
at the end
of the
period
, they had a decrease and saw the same number, which they had at the start of the
period
.
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