The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe, by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe,

by season.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons

where relevant.
The graph provides information about the percentage of several foods which are hot
coffee
, iced
coffee
,
ice
cream
, soup and salad at Vista Cafe.
Overall
,The type of food that achieved the highest
sales
in winter is hot
coffee
and the lowest
sales
go to iced
coffee
,
likewise
the summer season the highest
rate
of
sales
was almost equally between
ice
cream
and iced
coffee
. Summer has similar
sales
figures, soup and salad has the same
rate
about 25
then
the hot
coffee
rate
was 30,
as well as
ice
cream
and iced
coffee
by a margin of 5percentages between them the
rate
of the first one was 40 and the second one was 35. Winter has huge differences in
sales
for each type of food, hot
coffee
got about 75 and iced
coffee
almost 5, salad and
ice
cream
approximately the same
rate
about 25 and soup is popular
this
season with 50 per cent.
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