The diagram shows the life cycle of a salmon

The diagram shows the life cycle of a salmon
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the life cycle of a salmon
The diagram illustrates the stages in the lifespan of a
salmon
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.
Overall
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, there are various stages in the life cycle of a common
salmon
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, from
fish
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spawning to when they become fully-grown adults. At the beginning of the process, the rivers where the grown-up female
salmon
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start lay a massive number of eggs, after which eggs are incubated before developing into tiny fishing.
This
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is followed by
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fish
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having a long tail, at which point they have an immature shape and gradually develop their oars. In the next stage, the
fish
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grow quickly in size and move to freshwater rearing before migrating to estuaries where they continue to be reared. The process continues with the
salmon
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becoming much bigger and migrating to the ocean where they develop into mature adult
fish
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.
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, the cycle begins again when adult
fish
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migrate upstream to spawning areas of rivers where they will mate and spawn.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, fish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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