The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
•The chart provided illustrates the count of
trips
taken by children in a certain country to commute to and from Use synonyms
school
using various forms of transportation in the years 1990 and 2010.
•In 1990, walking to Use synonyms
school
was predominant, with approximately 12 Use synonyms
million
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trips
per Use synonyms
year
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In contrast
, only 4 Linking Words
million
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trips
were made by car. The remaining modes of transport, Use synonyms
such
as cycling, walking and Linking Words
bus
, and just Use synonyms
bus
, each showed a similar figure of about 6 Use synonyms
million
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trips
per Use synonyms
year
.
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However
, 2010 presented a significant shift. The Linking Words
number
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students
commuting to Use synonyms
school
by car rose to the highest, at 11 Use synonyms
million
per Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, the Linking Words
number
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students
walking to Use synonyms
school
decreased to 6 Use synonyms
million
per Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
number
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students
cycling to Use synonyms
school
recorded the lowest figure, at 2 Use synonyms
million
. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
number
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students
using walking and Use synonyms
bus
and just Use synonyms
bus
decreased to 3 Use synonyms
million
and 5 Use synonyms
million
respectively, compared to 1990.
Over time, with the development of transportation, it seems more common for children to travel by car rather than walkingUse synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, school, million, year, bus, number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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