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The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
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•The chart provided illustrates the count of
trips
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 taken by children in a certain country to commute to and from
school
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 using various forms of transportation in the years 1990 and 2010. •In 1990, walking to
school
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 was predominant, with approximately 12
million
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trips
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 per
year
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.
In contrast
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, only 4
million
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trips
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 were made by car. The remaining modes of transport,
such
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 as cycling, walking and
bus
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, and just
bus
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, each showed a similar figure of about 6
million
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trips
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 per
year
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.
However
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, 2010 presented a significant shift. The
number
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 of
students
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 commuting to
school
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 by car rose to the highest, at 11
million
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 per
year
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.
Conversely
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, the
number
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 of
students
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 walking to
school
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 decreased to 6
million
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 per
year
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.
Additionally
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, the
number
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 of
students
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 cycling to
school
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 recorded the lowest figure, at 2
million
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. Meanwhile, the
number
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 of
students
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 using walking and
bus
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 and just
bus
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 decreased to 3
million
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 and 5
million
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 respectively, compared to 1990. Over time, with the development of transportation, it seems more common for children to travel by car rather than walking

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, school, million, year, bus, number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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