Space exploration is too expensive and money should be spent on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some believe that

discoverring

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discovering

the mysteries of

universe

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should be invested.

However

, many people

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that there are more important purposes which require the value of

money

. From my point of view,

athough

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although

though

space

exploration

is a vital issue, there are many problems which are more important in the present time. It is obvious that there are several advantages

of

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investing in

space

technology.

Firstly

, humans

are

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usually a sense of curiosity;

hence

, adventure and

exploration

would be an interesting way in order to satisfy their desire.

As a result

, it helps people answer

variously

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fundamental questions.

Secondly

, new technologies and

researches

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can be developed and the energy exhaustion may be solved by

space

exploration

simutaneously

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simultaneously

.

On the other hand

, many disadvantages of

this

matter outweigh.

While

meeting the demand of

astronaunts'

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astronauts'

lives is very expensive,

money

should be invested in more pressing problems

such

as climate change, famine or poverty.

Moreover

, it is a waste of

money

since it produces no instant benefits for humans. To cite an instance, whenever having an experiment

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they are not certain about any success.

Therefore

,

instead

of

space

investment,

money

should be spent on

others

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essential purposes effectively. In conclusion,

inspite

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in spite

of a lot of useful benefits from

space

exploration

such

as reducing

the

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energy exhaustion and satisfying the desire of humans, I strongly claim that having other vital purposes

which

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need

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to be supported by

government

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and communities.