You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:give details about the concertdescribe how you won the ticketsexplain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I have won two tickets for the concert which can be music or of
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apply
Add an article
the well
a well
well known
artist. I would like to invite you Add a hyphen
well-known
for
our favourite singer Change preposition
to
drake
as he is Capitalize word
Drake
has show
in our citywide hall Wrong verb form
showing
this
year.
Last
week, I have
participated in Unnecessary verb
apply
golf
match tournament which was held in Correct article usage
a golf
Correct article usage
the marinasite
marinasite
garden. And there were attractive Correct your spelling
marina site
marinate
winning
prizes for whoever Verb problem
apply
wins
the game. Honestly, there were Wrong verb form
won
lot
of competitors with me I wasn't quite sure that I Change the article
a lot
will
be successful Wrong verb form
would
to win
the game. certainly, I won the match and I Change preposition
in winning
have
got two free Unnecessary verb
apply
concerts
tickets from the organizers. AsChange the noun form
concert
,
I saw Remove the comma
apply
yeasterday
a magazine article that drake is coming in town for the music concert in coming long weekend and I am so excited to attend Correct your spelling
yesterday
this
time.
Ever since childhood, we saw drake
on television only but Capitalize word
Drake
this
time we can go to the concert. And it's a long weekend so I hope that you have day
off from work as well. Add an article
a day
the day
Although
, I really like your company for going out so it would be so much fun.
You can let me know for
your response Change preposition
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till
Friday so I can reserve seats. Hope to hear from you soon my friend.
Yours truly,
SamChange preposition
by
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task achievement
Be sure to include more specific details about the concert (date, time, and venue), as this will give the reader a clearer idea of the event.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that you proofread your letter for grammatical errors and inconsistencies to enhance clarity and readability. Small mistakes can be distracting.
coherence cohesion
Breaking the letter into more logical paragraphs can improve readability. Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and inviting, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a greeting and closing, making it feel complete and personal.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,