You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:give details about the concertdescribe how you won the ticketsexplain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I have won two tickets for the concert which can be music or

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the well

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well known

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artist. I would like to invite you

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our favourite singer

drake

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as he is

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in our citywide hall

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year.

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week, I

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participated in

golf

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match tournament which was held in

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marinasite

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garden. And there were attractive

winning

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prizes for whoever

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the game. Honestly, there were

lot

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of competitors with me I wasn't quite sure that I

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be successful

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the game. certainly, I won the match and I

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got two free

concerts

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tickets from the organizers. As

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I saw

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a magazine article that drake is coming in town for the music concert in coming long weekend and I am so excited to attend

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time. Ever since childhood, we saw

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on television only but

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time we can go to the concert. And it's a long weekend so I hope that you have

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off from work as well.

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, I really like your company for going out so it would be so much fun. You can let me know

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your response

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Friday so I can reserve seats. Hope to hear from you soon my friend. Yours truly, Sam

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task achievement

Be sure to include more specific details about the concert (date, time, and venue), as this will give the reader a clearer idea of the event.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that you proofread your letter for grammatical errors and inconsistencies to enhance clarity and readability. Small mistakes can be distracting.

coherence cohesion

Breaking the letter into more logical paragraphs can improve readability. Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is friendly and inviting, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend.

coherence cohesion

The letter includes a greeting and closing, making it feel complete and personal.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

227 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:give details about the concertdescribe how you won the ticketsexplain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

The Closing

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Despite health warnings, a large number of people countinue to smoke all over the world. why should we be concernec about this?what soloutions would you suggest?

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