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You are taking a course at a local collage. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to your lecturer. introduce yourself explain why you have not handed in the project yet request more time to do it.

#course #collage #deadline #project #week #lecturer #request #time
Dear Sir, I'm writing
this
 letter to you regarding my
project
 submission which was due
last
week
. My name is Vipin Abraham and I am a sophomore at SP Jain College,Dubai. I am specialising in Supply Chain Management and am waiting to submit a
project
 on Warehouse Management Systems as part of my final year paper which was due
last
week
. Unfortunately, I have not been able to submit my
project
 since I had to travel to my home country
due to
 a family emergency. My mother had taken a critically ill situation,
hence
 I was not in the right mental state to work on the assignment provided. I will be back in Dubai early next
week
 and can continue with the
project
. I would like to humbly request you to allow me 1 more
week
 time to submit the
project
,
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so that I can continue with my sessions as per schedule. I hope you consider my request and allow me ample time to complete the
project
. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Vipin Abraham
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coherence cohesion
Consider rephrasing sentences to vary sentence structure, enhancing readability and interest. For example, 'My name is Vipin Abraham and I am a sophomore at SP Jain College,Dubai' can be varied with 'I am Vipin Abraham, currently a sophomore at SP Jain College in Dubai.'
task achievement
Provide a bit more detail on your commitment to completing the project on time moving forward. This will help strengthen your request for an extension.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured, with clear paragraphs each addressing a specific point.
task achievement
You maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for this context.
coherence cohesion
The closing of the letter effectively conveys your request and openness to further communication.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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