The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today

Summarize the information by selecting and  reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps below illustrate the changes
of
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coastline area in Australia from 1950 to today.
Overall
, the waterfront area has significant development including access roads and some new facilities. In 1950, the access road only went to
a
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parking located next to the pavilion. the pavilion, dining tables and a playground lined along the road in the south. A
light house
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was located near the 25m
pool
on the eastern side of the beach. On the western side of the beach, there was only a small
pool
to be positioned. At present, It is around a lighthouse that the access roads are extended. The pavilion is situated between two car parks and two swimming pools are remained.
However
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a 25m
pool
located on the western side is converted into a 50m
pool
with a new restaurant and surf club. a 25m
pool
in the east is unchanged,
although
it is
also
accompanied by a new
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surf club.
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