The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
The two maps below illustrate the changes
of
coastline area in Australia from 1950 to today.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the waterfront area has significant development including access roads and some new facilities.
In 1950, the access road only went to a
parking located next to the pavilion. the pavilion, dining tables and a playground lined along the road in the south. A Remove the article
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light house
was located near the 25m Correct your spelling
lighthouse
pool
on the eastern side of the beach. On the western side of the beach, there was only a small pool
to be positioned.
At present, It is around a lighthouse that the access roads are extended. The pavilion is situated between two car parks and two swimming pools are remained. However
a 25m Add a comma
However,
pool
located on the western side is converted into a 50m pool
with a new restaurant and surf club. a 25m pool
in the east is unchanged, although
it is also
accompanied by a new other
surf club.Correct word choice
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