The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar graph illustrates the
number
of
students
from five nations (India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia) in thousands at three different universities.
Overall
, Indian
students
have the highest
number
of enrolments
whereas
Colombian
students
the
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lowest. Of the three featured universities,
University
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of Riverview received the most
number
of applications. With regards to
University
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the University
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of Riverview, around 3500 Vietnamese
students
are enlisted. Interestingly, twice the
number
of
Indians
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students
are enrolled in comparison to the former and precisely 5000
students
from Nepal have applied. In the Smithtown
University
, 6000 Indian
students
are enrolled.
Additionally
, 4000 and 2000
students
from Nepal and Vietnam respectively. Analysing the data
further
, it is clearly evident that similar trends are observed at
the
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Earlwood
University
with 5000 Indians, 4000 Nepali and 3000 Vietnamese
students
are
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enlisted. Surprisingly, in all three universities, the
number
of
students
from Indonesia and Colombia constantly stays below 2000
students
.
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