The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates four mechanisms of
waste-management
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waste management
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, which
includes
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include
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burning, recycling, usage as chemicals, and landfilling, in four European nations.
Overall
, in all countries apart from the Netherlands, landfilling is the most utilized way to deal with rubbish. In Italy and Spain, the mechanism of Landfilling is used to handle
the
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40% of
waste
,
while
in the UK it is utilized for almost 70% of
waste
.
However
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However,
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in the Netherlands, Landfilling is only used for only almost 10% of
waste
. The Netherlands
instead
used the recycling method for most of its rubbish, by 70%. The method to deal with
waste
by using them as chemicals is
also
relatively popular in three countries,
for example
in
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Italy, Spain, and the UK are reported to use that method for nearly 20% of their
waste
.
While
the mechanism of burning is only widely
utillized
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utilised
in Italy at a little above 20% and Spain at almost 30%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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