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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant
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The provided table illustrates information related to the underground railway
system
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 in big cities with the date opened,
kilometres
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 of
route
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 and
passengers
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 per
year
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. Six cities are being compared.
Overall
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, a glance at the table reveals that the earliest railway
system
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 was founded in
London
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,
while
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 the latest
system
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 was established in Los Angeles. The longest
route
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 is in
London
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,
whereas
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 the shortest is in
Kyoto
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. The majority of
passengers
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 per
year
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 was in Tokyo,
while
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 in
Kyoto
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 was the minority of
passengers
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. Now, turning to the details, with regards to the
year
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 proportion of cities, the first railway
system
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 was opened in
London
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 in 1863,
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 the latest one was in Los Angeles in 2001. An approximately equal
year
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 of construction 5 years apart was associated with Washington DC and
Kyoto
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 (1976 and 1981, respectively). It is interesting to note that in
London
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 there is the biggest
route
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 394
kilometres
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, in the second place is the Paris
route
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 199
kilometres
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,
whereas
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 in the
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 one
is
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 Los Angeles 28
kilometres
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. The maximum number of
passengers
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 per
year
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, 1928 million, reflected Tokyo,
while
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 the minimum number, 45 million, applied to
Kyoto
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words system, kilometres, route, passengers, year, london, kyoto with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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