It is argued by some
people
that movies shown on television or in
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theatersChange the spelling
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which contain ferocity should
be controlChange the verb form
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by the government
while
an alternative point of view is that the
amount
of
violence
should be kept intact.
This
essay agrees with the
soonerCorrect word choice
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statement and
layWrong verb form
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out the
below
There can be no doubt that almost the
of viewers nowadays
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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teenagerFix the agreement mistake
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. For that
the
of
violentAdd an article
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filmFix the agreement mistake
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with too
muchCorrect quantifier usage
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abusive
elementFix the agreement mistake
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has a profound effect on mental
.
Moreover
, these
films
have
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on not only the young but
also
the adults.
This
content
leadChange the verb form
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to
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increase in criminal crime.
Due to theChange preposition
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fact that
people
watchCorrect pronoun usage
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abusive
elementFix the agreement mistake
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frequently think that using
gunFix the agreement mistake
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or
knifeFix the agreement mistake
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is normal and easy to break the law.
As a result
, reducing the
amount
of
violence
in violent
films
that
people
will never have abusive behaviour
An alternative
view pointCorrect your spelling
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of
this
case is that many
people
still support the development of
action
films
with high excitement.
This
is because several
people
watch
action
films
as a way to relax. They feel engaged with violent
elementFix the agreement mistake
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and not be attracted if
theseChange the determiner
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content is controlled by
governmentAdd an article
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. For that reason, many
arguedWrong verb form
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that
violence
is
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featuresFix the agreement mistake
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of
this
genre of
films
and to ensure that they will earn enough profit, abusive features
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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necessary.
This
may be true but watching too
muchCorrect quantifier usage
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violent elements and behaviours is always a potential danger with
thoughtsCorrect article usage
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and manner of
people
This
writer
that the limit of age for
action
or horror movies is not a good solution. What I mean is many
cinemaChange to a plural noun
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is Unnecessary verb
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lack
of Change preposition
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responsibility
inChange preposition
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age control
thereforCorrect your spelling
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many teenagers who are not old enough can watch
the Correct article usage
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movies with high
levelFix the agreement mistake
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of
violence
.
Thus
, limiting the
amount
of
violence
in these
films
is always
necessaryAdd an article
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solution to certain the development of the country
In conclusion, despite the contributions of
action
films
to the economy of the country, they are
also
a risk
withChange preposition
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children and the
of
countryCorrect article usage
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.
GovernmentCorrect article usage
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should reduce the
amount
of
violence
in
action
films