The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.

The map describes the changes that

accured

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occurred

at a

museum

from the year 1957 compared to

year

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the year

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2007 . The

museum

contains several

divistions

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divisions

such

as the local history room ,

museum

store , and other rooms . In the following

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i

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will

further

elaborate

the

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specific changes that

happend

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happened

happen

.

Overall

, the

museum

had expanded by replacing the wide area of the garden , the

museum

had expanded , adding some

amenties

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amenities

such

as car parking ,

cafe

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, and

education

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an education

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centre .

Firstly

, when entering the

museum

it will get you to the shop , compared to the year 1957 that directly

guide

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guides

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you to the national history exhibition .

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a cafe

had

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been added in the

south east

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southeast

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of the

museum

.

Secondly

, the local history Room was expanded and had been placed at the centre of the

museum

.

In

addition

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a reception has been built just by the right side of the

museum

shop.