The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the total number of people arrested, comprising both
men
and women
, for various types of crimes in 2008.
Overall
, there were seven types of offences
, with the highest percentage being violence against the person, while
the lowest was robbery.
In detail, violence against the person accounted for the largest percentage of arrests
, with slightly over 30% for men
and just under 35% for women
. The second-highest proportion of offences
was theft and handling stolen
goods, committed by 20% of Change preposition
of stolen
men
and around 30% of women
. For other offences
, men
were more frequently arrested than women
, with the percentages being 15% and just under 15%, respectively.
On the other hand
, criminal damage and drug offences
each accounted for just under 10% of arrests
, with men
being the predominant offenders. Similarly
, robbery, fraud, and forgery had the lowest percentages of arrests
for both men
and women
, each being just under 5%. For robbery, men
were more often arrested than women
, while
for fraud and forgery, women
accounted for around 3% of the arrests
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