The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the total number of people arrested, comprising both
men
and
women
, for various types of crimes in 2008.
Overall
, there were seven types of
offences
, with the highest percentage being violence against the person,
while
the lowest was robbery. In detail, violence against the person accounted for the largest percentage of
arrests
, with slightly over 30% for
men
and just under 35% for
women
. The second-highest proportion of
offences
was theft and handling
stolen
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goods, committed by 20% of
men
and around 30% of
women
. For other
offences
,
men
were more frequently arrested than
women
, with the percentages being 15% and just under 15%, respectively.
On the other hand
, criminal damage and drug
offences
each accounted for just under 10% of
arrests
, with
men
being the predominant offenders.
Similarly
, robbery, fraud, and forgery had the lowest percentages of
arrests
for both
men
and
women
, each being just under 5%. For robbery,
men
were more often arrested than
women
,
while
for fraud and forgery,
women
accounted for around 3% of the
arrests
.
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