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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps indicate an industrial zone in
the
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Norbition town
,
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 and the forecasted improvements in
this
 area.
It is clear that
this
 section is going to completely
convert
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to
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 a residential area. It could be seen that
the
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new ways are going to
constructed
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 in future that
connected
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 the main square in
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the center
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center
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 to the north, south and east of the map. The way that will be constructed to the north will go over the river and make a way for a new house on the other side.
In addition
, the
rood
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 that will
ended
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at
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 the south will make a new square there. In the
center
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 of the map, factories will be demolished and
replace
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 by
housings
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housing
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 and other buildings. There would be a playground in the north of
east
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the east
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rood
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road
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, a medical
center
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centre
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 in the south, and
in
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at
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 the end of the
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rood,
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rood
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road
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 a school is planning to build. On the west south of the square, is going to build
building
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a building
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 for shops.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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