The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows that there is
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noteable
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notable
noticeable
variation in the primary exports in Southland
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between 2000 and 2025. The most
noticeble
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noticeable
trend was the rise
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income obtained by the state from international tourism.
This
saw a considerable incline from 8.1
billion
$
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earnings in 2000 to 8.9
billion
$ in 20…, and there is a prediction of almost 10
billion
$ to be made in the upcoming years.
Moreover
, a contrast in income numbers is observed in the exports of dairy products where the amount of approximately 7
billion
$ in 2000 has grown
substantally
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substantially
to 9.9
billion
$ in 20…, and
are
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expected to decline slightly to 9.5
billion
$ in 2025.
By contrast
, with a lower export rate, meat products are anticipated to continue to have a decline in earnings with 6
billion
$ since 2000 to 5
billion
$ expected in the near future. Taken as a whole, there have been considerable changes in the number of money received from different export products offered by Southland
since
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2000 to 2005.
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