The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the percentage of market share of major brand notebooks between 2006 and 2014.
Overall
, the gadgets from HP manufacturers are leading over the whole period.
While
the proportion of HP was rising gradually, the Dell company increased sharply. On the other side, other unknown brands experienced a downward trend. From 2006 to 2007, many famous companies had a upward trend
such
as HP increased from 31.4% to 34%, Dell from 16.6% to 20.2% and Toshiba from 6.2 to 7.3 the reverse was true for corporations like Samsung, Lenovo and others. The share of sales of Samsung and Lenovo declined a tiny portion over one year.
On the other hand
, in 2014, the ratio of the most popular enterprises -HP, Dell and Samsung- had an upward tendency of nearly 5% for all of them,
however
, -Toshiba, Lenovo and Fujitsu- rose just around 1% respectively.
Moreover
, other non-famous companies had a rapid fall from 19.3% to 7.11%.
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  • market share
  • percentage points
  • market presence
  • ranking
  • market leader
  • least market share
  • total market share
  • market consolidation
  • market diversification
  • new entrants
  • exits
  • highlight
  • compare
  • decline
  • increase
  • improvement
  • loss of ground
  • manufacturer
  • worldwide
  • notebook computer
  • notable
  • significant
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