You are getting married. Write a letter to an English speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter: - Describe who you are going to marry - Tell what will happen on the wedding day (the schedule) - Explain why it's important for him/her to be at the wedding

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Dear Josh, How's it going? It's been a long time since we
last
saw each other. I am writing
this
to invite you to, guess what?
,
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my wedding. I know you must be getting
real
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excited after reading
this
.
This
special
day
is going to be on July 23, in almost a month. I told you about my girlfriend Komal in my previous letters. We used to work together and
then
we both hit it off and are now together for almost 3 years. We decided to take our relationship
further
and are now going to be husband and wife. Komal and I have decided not to have a grand wedding. So, it's only going to be three functions.
Ring
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ceremony will be on 21st July.
Then
on July 23, the marriage function will happen and
finally
, the reception will be held the next
day
, on July 24. You've always been there for me, Josh, in fortunate and unfortunate times. That's why your presence on
this
important
day
is going to be really valuable
for
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me. I will see you on the big
day
then
. Yours Lovingly, Lovish
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coherence cohesion
The letter is well-organized with a logical structure. To further improve, consider adding a brief overview of what the wedding reflects about you and Komal as a couple to offer a more personal touch.
task achievement
The tone is perfect for a friendly invitation. To perfect task response, you could add some specific details or anecdotes about your relationship to ignite further excitement and engagement.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-placed and add a friendly touch to the letter.
task achievement
The letter addresses all the required points thoroughly and maintains a suitable, warm tone throughout.
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