WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below g/vas information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main loaturos, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates
a
proportions of weekly expenses by families in one country between 1968 and 2018.
Correct article usage
the
Overall
, it is clear that
families were more likely to spent
Change the form of the verb
spend
in
food in the past. Change preposition
on
Then
, after five decades, the numbers changed and their expenses were more notable in leisure and housing.
As we can see in the bar chart, it is interesting to note that people spent their
35% weekly income on food in 1968, which was the highest. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Then
, it decreased substantially to roughly 16% in 2018. Similarly
, regarding downward trends, people were
spent less Unnecessary verb
apply
in
Clothing and Change preposition
on
footware
, and personal goods just under 5% in the next five decades.
Correct your spelling
footwear
On the other hand
, people
expenses on housing Change noun form
people's
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
almost
Change preposition
by almost
the
double of its value (from 10% to just under 20%) from 1698 to 2018 , Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, speding
in leisure time increased dramatically by almost 12% (from 9% to 22% approximately) in the same studied time.Correct your spelling
spending
speeding
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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