WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below g/vas information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main loaturos, and make comparisons where relevant.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below g/vas information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main loaturos, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates
a
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proportions of weekly expenses by families in one country between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
,
it is clear that
families were more likely to
spent
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in
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on
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food in the past.
Then
, after five decades, the numbers changed and their expenses were more notable in leisure and housing. As we can see in the bar chart, it is interesting to note that people spent
their
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35% weekly income on food in 1968, which was the highest.
Then
, it decreased substantially to roughly 16% in 2018.
Similarly
, regarding downward trends, people
were
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spent less
in
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on
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Clothing and
footware
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footwear
, and personal goods just under 5% in the next five decades.
On the other hand
,
people
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people's
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expenses on housing
increase
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increased
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almost
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by almost
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double of its value (from 10% to just under 20%) from 1698 to 2018 ,
In addition
,
speding
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spending
speeding
in leisure time increased dramatically by almost 12% (from 9% to 22% approximately) in the same studied time.
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