The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates both male and female academic
staff
members in the year 2016 for different programs.
To begin
with, the major arts and education have more female staff
compared to male staff
. The percentage of females is 58% and 72% for art and education while
male only has 42% and 25%. Furthermore
, medicine majors
have similar interest rates for males and females with a percentage of 49% and 50%.
However
, there are several majors
such
as science, law, engineering, and business that include more male staff
rather than female staff
. The male percentages for these programs are 62%, 60%, 85%, and 62% respectively. While
the female staff
only have 38%, 40%, 18%, and 35%. In addition
, the largest difference in percentages between male and female staff
go to engineering majors
with a difference of 67%.
To conclude
, there are several majors
that are mostly dominated by males or females, while
medicine majors
are keen on a similar amount of gender.Submitted by kelly on
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