Some people believe that there are various reasons that can motivate a person to keep working for the same company whereas others say that money is the main reason which gives motivation. Do you agree or disagree?#

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my opinion, to agree or disagree with the

statement

that Some people consider that there are various effects that can motivate a person to keep working for the same company

whereas

others say that money is the main reason which gives motivation. is an important issue to discuss.

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I will present some arguments supporting

this

statement

, after which, some aspects against that will be discussed. On the one hand, many people agree with

this

statement

for many important reasons. The most significant is that The reason why an individual would stay for a long period of

time

could be because of their family commitments.

For example

, if a woman is married and has kids and

also

already bought a house in a particular area might prefer to stay in the same job as long as possible because she needs a stable job to secure her family life. Not only that, for a woman, distance is very important because she might need to attend to her kids as soon as possible at any

time

of the day. The nearer the company is to her home, the more likely she will stick to that same working place for a very long

time

.

On the other hand

, other people oppose

this

statement

for many reasons. The most important is

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the physical very tried . In conclusion, it is not wrong to prioritize money to stay in a place but having good mental health and a good working environment is

also

important.